≈ Descend ≈
These Verses in Motion are part of this week special project on Soft Whispers with writer -poet Jim Bronyaur who is also creator and editor of SW … We both wrote verses starting from the same word & its opposite…
DESCEND
By LauraLME ©
Inclinations,
curved words
falling down
on this white desert,
like little drops of hope
taking shape in clouds of smoke.
Slides,
bending acts
extending downwards
laying on this black valley,
landslides of events
sweeping life away.
Avalanches,
heart tremors,
sliding down
the mountainside of our soul,
precipitation of feelings
descending impacts!
read Jim’s poem ≈> “Descend”
Posted on June 29, 2010, in Free Verses, Heart's prophecies, Poetry and tagged descend impact soul. Bookmark the permalink. 2 Comments.









Descending to reach a safer place, the mountainside of our soul… upon impact, check yourself for new meanings. Your poem is gripping and lovely. Ty xo
you have captured the trajectory of the descent. great poem with great imagery.