Comments on: Mosaic, a vision of Love. http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/ Words in verses & verses in ≈ motion ≈ by LauraLME © Sun, 05 Feb 2012 20:29:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: thomas http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-448 Tue, 23 Mar 2010 18:03:17 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-448 In the breach of a beach
in the brevity of a perfect birth.

Lovely to read aloud, especially

ropes of ferocious

Ha! Say it!

ropes of ferocious
ropes of ferocious

zzzzzhhhwows

we found
we won
we stood

climbing ropes of ferocious hopes!

your words flowing with morning coffee
oh a double buzz.
gratitude for this poem.

]]> By: jimcast http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-287 Fri, 16 Oct 2009 13:15:59 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-287 Again – perfect.

“we won the darkness” – another timeless line forever stuck in my mind.

Jim

]]> By: lauralme http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-26 Sat, 13 Jun 2009 22:23:47 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-26 Thank you for defining the essence of those verses better than i could ever do myself! Grateful, really grateful

]]> By: nick belardes http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-25 Sat, 13 Jun 2009 21:41:52 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-25 Good god this one gave me chills like I was standing on some cosmic beach at the edge of the universe…

]]> By: lauralme http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-23 Sat, 13 Jun 2009 16:31:25 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-23 Thank you, glad I could share it!

]]> By: rockferry09 http://iamlauramercurio.com/2009/10/13/mosaic-a-vision-of-love/#comment-22 Sat, 13 Jun 2009 16:03:00 +0000 http://iamlauramercurio.com/?p=93#comment-22 beautiful!

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